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HPCC-11438 DOCS: Update Data Tutorial for ECLWatch

Fix HPCC-11438 DOCS: Update Data Tutorial for ECLWatch
doc changes reflecting the tutorial through ECL Watch.

Signed-off-by: g-pan <greg.panagiotatos@lexisnexis.com>
g-pan 11 years ago
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docs/HPCCDataTutorial/DataTutorial.xml

@@ -335,17 +335,16 @@
               </figure></para>
               </figure></para>
 
 
             <para>Once you press the Upload button, a dialog opens where you
             <para>Once you press the Upload button, a dialog opens where you
-            can choose to <emphasis role="bold">Browse</emphasis> for a file
-            to upload. </para>
+            can choose a file to upload.</para>
           </listitem>
           </listitem>
 
 
           <listitem>
           <listitem>
             <para>Browse the files on your local machine, select the file to
             <para>Browse the files on your local machine, select the file to
-            upload and then press the <emphasis role="bold">Open</emphasis>
+            upload, and then press the <emphasis role="bold">Open</emphasis>
             button.</para>
             button.</para>
 
 
-            <para>The file you selected should appear in the <emphasis
-            role="bold">File Uploader</emphasis> dialog. </para>
+            <para>The file you selected displays in the <emphasis
+            role="bold">File Uploader</emphasis> dialog.</para>
 
 
             <para><figure>
             <para><figure>
                 <title>File Uploader</title>
                 <title>File Uploader</title>
@@ -361,7 +360,16 @@
 
 
           <listitem>
           <listitem>
             <para>Press the <emphasis role="bold">Start</emphasis> button to
             <para>Press the <emphasis role="bold">Start</emphasis> button to
-            complete the file upload.</para>
+            complete the file upload.<figure>
+                <title>Upload Progress</title>
+
+                <mediaobject>
+                  <imageobject>
+                    <imagedata fileref="images/LZimg06.jpg"
+                               vendor="eclwatchSS" />
+                  </imageobject>
+                </mediaobject>
+              </figure></para>
           </listitem>
           </listitem>
         </orderedlist>
         </orderedlist>
       </sect2>
       </sect2>
@@ -407,7 +415,7 @@
             sub-menu.</para>
             sub-menu.</para>
 
 
             <para>On the Landing Zones tab, click on the arrow next to your
             <para>On the Landing Zones tab, click on the arrow next to your
-            mydropzone container to see a list of uploaded files. <figure>
+            mydropzone container to expand the list of uploaded files. <figure>
                 <title>mydropzone</title>
                 <title>mydropzone</title>
 
 
                 <mediaobject>
                 <mediaobject>
@@ -420,16 +428,16 @@
 
 
             <para>Find the file you want to spray in the list
             <para>Find the file you want to spray in the list
             (OriginalPerson), check the box next to that file name to select
             (OriginalPerson), check the box next to that file name to select
-            that file. </para>
+            that file.</para>
 
 
             <para>Once you select the file from the list, the <emphasis
             <para>Once you select the file from the list, the <emphasis
-            role="bold">Spray</emphasis> action buttons become enabled.
-            </para>
+            role="bold">Spray</emphasis> action buttons become enabled.</para>
           </listitem>
           </listitem>
 
 
           <listitem>
           <listitem>
             <para>Press the <emphasis role="bold">Fixed</emphasis> action
             <para>Press the <emphasis role="bold">Fixed</emphasis> action
-            button. <figure>
+            button. This indicates that you are spraying a fixed width file.
+            <figure>
                 <title>Spray: Fixed action button</title>
                 <title>Spray: Fixed action button</title>
 
 
                 <mediaobject>
                 <mediaobject>
@@ -460,7 +468,7 @@
 
 
           <listitem>
           <listitem>
             <para>Choose the mythor cluster from the <emphasis
             <para>Choose the mythor cluster from the <emphasis
-            role="bold">Group</emphasis> drop list. </para>
+            role="bold">Group</emphasis> drop list.</para>
           </listitem>
           </listitem>
 
 
           <listitem>
           <listitem>
@@ -496,7 +504,7 @@
             <?dbfo keep-together="always"?>
             <?dbfo keep-together="always"?>
 
 
             <para>The workunit details page displays. You can view the
             <para>The workunit details page displays. You can view the
-            progress of the spray. </para>
+            progress of the spray.</para>
 
 
             <para><figure>
             <para><figure>
                 <title>View Progress</title>
                 <title>View Progress</title>
@@ -509,7 +517,7 @@
                 </mediaobject>
                 </mediaobject>
               </figure></para>
               </figure></para>
 
 
-            <para> Once the spray is complete, we can proceed.</para>
+            <para>Once the spray is complete, we can proceed.</para>
           </listitem>
           </listitem>
         </orderedlist>
         </orderedlist>
       </sect2>
       </sect2>
@@ -530,11 +538,6 @@
 
 
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>Log in to your environment</para>
           <para>Log in to your environment</para>
-
-          <para>For purposes of this tutorial, let’s create a folder called
-          <emphasis role="bold">Tutorial</emphasis><emphasis
-          role="bold">YourName</emphasis><emphasis> </emphasis>(where
-          <emphasis>YourName</emphasis> is your name).</para>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
 
 
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
@@ -553,6 +556,11 @@
                 </imageobject>
                 </imageobject>
               </mediaobject>
               </mediaobject>
             </figure></para>
             </figure></para>
+
+          <para>For purposes of this tutorial, let’s create a folder called
+          <emphasis role="bold">Tutorial</emphasis><emphasis
+          role="bold">YourName</emphasis><emphasis> </emphasis>(where
+          <emphasis>YourName</emphasis> is your name).</para>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
 
 
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
@@ -695,7 +703,7 @@ END;    </programlisting> <figure>
           </listitem>
           </listitem>
 
 
           <listitem>
           <listitem>
-            <para> Write the following code (remember to replace
+            <para>Write the following code (remember to replace
             <emphasis>YN</emphasis> with your initials):</para>
             <emphasis>YN</emphasis> with your initials):</para>
 
 
             <para><programlisting>IMPORT TutorialYourName;
             <para><programlisting>IMPORT TutorialYourName;
@@ -1023,7 +1031,8 @@ OUTPUT(FetchPeopleByZip);
           </listitem>
           </listitem>
 
 
           <listitem>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Examine the result, then close the Builder window.</para>
+            <para>Examine the result, then close the Builder window and
+            resubmit the code. </para>
 
 
             <para><emphasis role="bold">Note</emphasis>: You can change the
             <para><emphasis role="bold">Note</emphasis>: You can change the
             value of the <emphasis role="bold">ZipValue</emphasis> field to
             value of the <emphasis role="bold">ZipValue</emphasis> field to
@@ -1095,7 +1104,7 @@ OUTPUT(resultset);
           <para>The Publish dialog displays, with the Job Name field
           <para>The Publish dialog displays, with the Job Name field
           automatically filled in. You can add a comment in the Comment field
           automatically filled in. You can add a comment in the Comment field
           if you wish, then press Submit. <figure>
           if you wish, then press Submit. <figure>
-              <title>Submit </title>
+              <title>Publish Dialog</title>
 
 
               <mediaobject>
               <mediaobject>
                 <imageobject>
                 <imageobject>
@@ -1106,8 +1115,8 @@ OUTPUT(resultset);
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
 
 
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>If there are no error messages, the workunit is
-          published.</para>
+          <para>If there are no error messages, the workunit is published.
+          Leave the builder window open, you will need it again later. </para>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
       </orderedlist>
       </orderedlist>
 
 
@@ -1259,7 +1268,7 @@ OUTPUT(resultset);
         <orderedlist>
         <orderedlist>
           <listitem>
           <listitem>
             <para>Select the workunit tab for the FetchPeopleByZipService that
             <para>Select the workunit tab for the FetchPeopleByZipService that
-            you just compiled. </para>
+            you just compiled.</para>
 
 
             <para>This opens the workunit in an ECL Watch tab.</para>
             <para>This opens the workunit in an ECL Watch tab.</para>
           </listitem>
           </listitem>
@@ -1269,7 +1278,7 @@ OUTPUT(resultset);
 
 
             <para>Press the <emphasis role="bold">Publish</emphasis> action
             <para>Press the <emphasis role="bold">Publish</emphasis> action
             button, then verify the information in the dialog and press
             button, then verify the information in the dialog and press
-            <emphasis role="bold">Submit</emphasis>. </para>
+            <emphasis role="bold">Submit</emphasis>.</para>
 
 
             <para><figure>
             <para><figure>
                 <title>Publish Query</title>
                 <title>Publish Query</title>
@@ -1304,7 +1313,7 @@ OUTPUT(resultset);
             <?dbfo keep-together="always"?>
             <?dbfo keep-together="always"?>
 
 
             <para>Click on the <emphasis
             <para>Click on the <emphasis
-            role="bold">fetchpeoplebyzipservice.1</emphasis> hyperlink.</para>
+            role="bold">fetchpeoplebyzipservice</emphasis> hyperlink.</para>
 
 
             <para>The form for the service displays.</para>
             <para>The form for the service displays.</para>
 
 

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