HPCC-16495 Edits based upon review

Signed-off-by: Jim DeFabia <jamesdefabia@lexisnexis.com>

docs/VisualizingECL/Visualizing_Includer.xml

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
       of Reed Elsevier Properties Inc., used under license.</para>
 
       <para>HPCC Systems<superscript>®</superscript> is a registered trademark
-      of LexisNexis Risk Data Management Inc.</para>
+      of LexisNexis Risk Data Managemenresul;t Inc.</para>
 
       <para>Other products, logos, and services may be trademarks or
       registered trademarks of their respective companies.</para>
@@ -58,7 +58,6 @@
     </mediaobject>
   </bookinfo>
 
- 
   <xi:include href="VisualizingECL/VizMods/VizIntro.xml"
               xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 
@@ -75,6 +74,5 @@
               xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 
   <xi:include href="VisualizingECL/VizMods/Any.xml"
-              xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" /> 
-  
+              xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 </book>

docs/VisualizingECL/VizMods/Choropleth.xml

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <title><emphasis>Geospatial Methods</emphasis></title>
 
   <para>This section covers the Geospatial methods that create geographical
-  map visualizations contained in the Choropleth module. These methods depict
+  map visualizations contained in the Choropleth module. These methods project
   data onto maps using shading to depict values.</para>
 
   <para></para>

docs/VisualizingECL/VizMods/Methods.xml

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <title><emphasis>Methods</emphasis></title>
 
   <para>Methods are categorized by the shape of the data they support. The
-  categories are</para>
+  categories are:</para>
 
   <para><link linkend="VizTwoD">Two-Dimensional</link></para>
 

docs/VisualizingECL/VizMods/TwoD.xml

@@ -382,7 +382,7 @@ viz_Summary;
     </informaltable>
 
     <para>The <emphasis role="bold">WordCloud </emphasis>visualization method
-    creates a word cloud chart from two-dimensional data. A WordClous is
+    creates a word cloud chart from two-dimensional data. A WordCloud is
     weighted word list in visual design. It is a visual representation for
     text data, typically used to depict the weight or importance of words by
     the font size or color.</para>

docs/VisualizingECL/VizMods/VizIntro.xml

@@ -29,18 +29,16 @@
   <sect1 id="VizInstall">
     <title>Installation</title>
 
-    <para>The Visualization bundle is an open-source add-on to the HPCC
-    platform to allow you to create visualizations from the results from
-    queries written in ECL.</para>
-
-    <para>To install, use the ecl command line interface.</para>
+    <para>To install the Visualization bundle, use the ecl command line
+    interface.</para>
 
     <para></para>
 
     <para><programlisting>ecl bundle install https://github.com/hpcc-systems/Visualizer.git</programlisting></para>
 
-    <para>To use the "ecl bundle install &lt;git url&gt;" command, git must be
-    installed on your machine and accessible to the user (in the path).</para>
+    <para>To use the "ecl bundle install &lt;git url&gt;" command, you must
+    have git installed and configured on your system. Git must be accessible
+    to the user (in the path).</para>
 
     <para></para>
   </sect1>
@@ -51,6 +49,29 @@
     <para>Once installed, you merely IMPORT the library, then call any method
     that is appropriate for your data shape.</para>
 
+    <para>Creating a basic visualization typically requires the following
+    steps: </para>
+
+    <para><orderedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>Creation of a suitable dataset.</para>
+        </listitem>
+
+        <listitem>
+          <para>Output the dataset with a suitable name, so that visualization
+          can locate the data. </para>
+        </listitem>
+
+        <listitem>
+          <para>Create (and output) a the visualization, referencing the named
+          output from step 2. </para>
+        </listitem>
+      </orderedlist></para>
+
+    <para>To change the appearance of the visualization, dermatology
+    properties can be provided while creating the visualization or can be
+    applied at runtime via the live dermatology property editor.</para>
+
     <para>For Example:</para>
 
     <programlisting format="linespecific">IMPORT Visualizer;
@@ -74,42 +95,42 @@ viz_bubble;
 
     <graphic fileref="../../images/viz10.jpg" />
 
-    <para> </para>
+    <para></para>
 
     <para>See <link linkend="VizMethods">Methods</link> for details about the
     categories of visualization methods and all available methods.</para>
-
-    <para></para>
-
-    <para></para>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="VizViewing">
     <title>Viewing the Visualization</title>
 
     <para>After running a query with a visualization included, you can see the
-    visualization in ECL Watch.</para>
+    visualization in ECL Watch. Visualizations are appended to the workunit as
+    additional <emphasis>resources</emphasis> and can be viewed from the
+    <emphasis role="bold">Resources</emphasis> tab on the Workunit Details
+    page.</para>
 
     <para>Open the workunit, then select the <emphasis
     role="bold">Resources</emphasis> tab.</para>
 
     <para><graphic fileref="../../images/viz07.jpg" /></para>
-
-    <para></para>
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 id="VizDermProp">
     <title>Dermatology Properties</title>
 
     <para>The dermatology layer provides a means of setting properties for the
-    manner in which a visualization appears. </para>
+    manner in which a visualization appears. For example, you can change the
+    palletteID to a new color scheme. After running a query with a
+    visualization included, it can be viewed within ECL Watch.</para>
 
-    <para>For example, you can change the palletteID to a new color scheme.
-    After running a query with a visualization included, you can see the
-    visualization in ECL Watch.</para>
+    <para>The <emphasis role="bold">Dermatology Editor</emphasis> lets you
+    alter the appearance of the visualization after it has been executed. The
+    same properties can also be specified in the ECL when creating the
+    visualization.</para>
 
-    <para>You can set properties in your ECL code or afterwards in ECL Watch:
-    </para>
+    <para>You can set properties in your ECL code or afterwards in ECL
+    Watch:</para>
 
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -119,8 +140,7 @@ viz_bubble;
 
       <listitem>
         <para>Press the <emphasis role="bold">Properties</emphasis> button.
-        Open the workunit, then select the <emphasis
-        role="bold">Resources</emphasis> tab.</para>
+        <emphasis role="bold"></emphasis></para>
 
         <graphic fileref="../../images/viz08.jpg" />
       </listitem>
@@ -138,9 +158,5 @@ viz_bubble;
     </orderedlist>
 
     <para></para>
-
-    <para></para>
-
-    <para></para>
   </sect1>
 </chapter>