r.external, r.external.out manual: minor text improvements

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raster/r.external.out/r.external.out.html

@@ -20,23 +20,27 @@ The module <em>r.external.out</em> can be used along with
 while writing out the results directly in GeoTIFF:
 
 <div class="code"><pre>
-# register GeoTIFF file in GRASS database:
-r.external terra_lst1km20030314.LST_Day.tif out=modis_celsius
+# register GeoTIFF file to be used in current mapset:
+r.external input=terra_lst1km20030314.LST_Day.tif output=modis_celsius
 
 # define output directory for files resulting from GRASS calculation:
 r.external.out directory=$HOME/gisoutput/ format="GTiff"
 
 # perform GRASS calculation (here: extract pixels &gt; 20 deg C)
-# write output directly as GeoTIFF:
-r.mapcalc "warm.tif = if(modis_celsius &gt; 20, modis_celsius, null() )"
+# this stores the output map directly as GeoTIFF:
+r.mapcalc "warm.tif = if(modis_celsius &gt; 20.0, modis_celsius, null() )"
 
 # cease GDAL output connection and turn back to write GRASS raster files:
 r.external.out -r
 
-# use the result elsewhere
-qgis $HOME/gisoutput/warm.tif
+# now use the resulting file elsewhere
+gdalinfo $HOME/gisoutput/warm.tif
 </pre></div>
 
+<h2>REFERENCES</h2>
+
+GDAL Pages: <a href="http://www.gdal.org">http://www.gdal.org/</a><br>
+
 <h2>SEE ALSO</h2>
 
 <em>
@@ -45,12 +49,9 @@ qgis $HOME/gisoutput/warm.tif
 <a href="r.external.html">r.external</a>
 </em>
 
-<h2>REFERENCES</h2>
-
-GDAL Pages: <a href="http://www.gdal.org">http://www.gdal.org/</a><br>
-
 <h2>AUTHOR</h2>
 
 Glynn Clements
 
-<p><i>Last changed: $Date$</i>
+<p>
+<i>Last changed: $Date$</i>

raster/r.external/r.external.html

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ changed to NULL (if() condition).
 
 <div class="code"><pre>
 # import of all channels (each channel will become a GRASS raster map):
-r.external  /home/user/data/maps/059100.tif out=ortho
+r.external input=/home/user/data/maps/059100.tif output=ortho
 g.region raster=ortho.3 -p
 d.rgb r=ortho.1 g=ortho.2 b=ortho.3
 r.composite r=ortho.1 g=ortho.2 b=ortho.3 output=ortho.rgb
@@ -42,19 +42,19 @@ likewise, results can be written out to standard raster formats with
 
 <div class="code"><pre>
 # register GeoTIFF file to be used in current mapset:
-r.external terra_lst1km20030314.LST_Day.tif out=modis_celsius
+r.external input=terra_lst1km20030314.LST_Day.tif output=modis_celsius
  
 # define output directory for files resulting from GRASS calculation:
 r.external.out directory=$HOME/gisoutput/ format="GTiff"
- 
-# perform GRASS calculation (here: extract pixels > 20 deg C)
+
+# perform GRASS calculation (here: extract pixels &gt; 20 deg C)
 # this stores the output map directly as GeoTIFF:
-r.mapcalc "warm.tif = if(modis_celsius > 20.0, modis_celsius, null() )"
- 
+r.mapcalc "warm.tif = if(modis_celsius &gt; 20.0, modis_celsius, null() )"
+
 # cease GDAL output connection and turn back to write GRASS raster files:
 r.external.out -r
- 
-# now use the result elsewhere
+
+# now use the resulting file elsewhere
 gdalinfo $HOME/gisoutput/warm.tif
 </pre></div>